Friday, November 18, 2005

Deem Me


Deem me psycho
If yer must
Deem me absurd
Without just

Deem me evil
Of morbid rants
Deem me dark
In poetic attempts

Deem me blatant
Deem me crude
Oblivious to those
With much prude

Deem me ignorant
Deem me a fool
Deem me a puppet
The devil’s tool

Deem me sinned
Deem me cursed
Deem me pagan
In hell I immerse

Deem me obnoxious
Deem me vile
For all yer deem
I deem myself

For I am X
But neither am I
Born with name
But nameless am I

For all yer judge
No shadow it casts
Deem me psycho
If yer must……

~ sorrow x ~

9 Comments:

Blogger atomicvelvetsigh said...

such haunting words.. strikes me.. your poetry is a beauty that's strange and enchanting..

(i shall link you)

20:54  
Blogger X said...

well thank yer atomic sigh, will link yer up as well...look out for the joint poem here next week

21:28  
Blogger X said...

hey TL, i wrote all recent three last week, saved in the draft folder, is three a week considered fast? anyways i've cleared everything for the joint poem thingy which i'm gonna start on mon, havent decided on a topic yet. yer'll havta explain to me about the theatre bit, kinda lost there...ahah

21:48  
Blogger X said...

anyways, just to let people know that there's someth wrong with the sorrowful picks section...i'll try to fix it, if anyone knows how it should be done, do let me know

22:12  
Blogger Cookiss99 said...

rythms and very meaningful..

17:27  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh said...

hi.. got my mail? well what's wrong with the sorrowful picks section btw?

is it this.. http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b176/velvetzki/buttons/code.jpg hope it helps..

8)

07:48  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh said...

ohh.. btw.. copy the code to your browser. cant seem to link it up here 8)

07:50  
Blogger X said...

the links in sorrowful picks dun work, tryin to find out why...in the meantime, ppl will just havta browse the monthly archieves to find them. thanks for the template part yer sent me, i'll try it out later

17:42  
Blogger X said...

thanks...that just maketh my day...heh

00:38  

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