Friday, November 25, 2005

Joint Poem

Finally.....it ends.....so how yer like it? Like to dedicate this piece to Deity and Chaos for their engagement on dec 1st, good luck guys.

*Just received a part from AVS, gonna include it as well




DEAD MAN WALKING

Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight

Ephipany of sorrows calling
Sorrows hunting twitching
It is of chaos the pain'll strive
It is of order the pain'll die

If we summon charon
For stygian trips
How he suffers us
The malignant deserts

Desert the crumbling hearts
To dust the earth
With death-
songs heaved
Within each breath

Until the soul
In endless flight
Finds its solace
In the darkening night

For chorus of death
Shall ring no bound
To prey on weak
Blood thirst of hound

So travel on
Endless quest
Cold heart
Caged in that chest

Tread across a bridge of sand,
Fleeting thought turn and give chase
To spidersilk memories of days gone by
As the sand slips slowly away.

Fear not, carry on
The journey is not all that long
The distance, an illusion
A miasma that will pass

Not another step you'll have to take
For the answers are inside of thee
Let go of all that bind
And slide away unto yourself

Just another lost soul throbbing
As the blood-thirst heart come forth
Alas death! unending unrest!
As I am bound to each step's dictate...
I commence myself to thee

For everything ends in me
Melacholy of death shadows me
Soon, Vanity becomes all reasons, for now I hear
Execution awaits in mental prison
Just another dead man walking


They wrote.....

2nd stanza -
  • Akasha

  • 3rd -
  • Billy

  • 4th -
  • TL Reynolds

  • 5th -
  • Daniel Barkowitz

  • 7th -
  • Raven Chaos

  • 8th -
  • Ms Freud

  • 9th/10th -
  • G

  • 11th -
  • AtomicVelvetSigh

  • Final -
  • Cookiss99

  • Special mention -
  • Lauren


  • Thank yer all for contributing

    morbidly yers
    ~ sorrow x ~

    14 Comments:

    Blogger LS said...

    All the different stanzas flowed together quite well.

    03:42  
    Blogger funlearning said...

    That came out really well. Good job to all the writers.

    04:54  
    Blogger Cookiss99 said...

    I LIKE!! can i copy and paste it on me blog???

    06:22  
    Blogger keed said...

    anytime poet friend. stay morbid and golden.

    08:32  
    Blogger atomicvelvetsigh said...

    ohh wow wonderful piece! tssk so sorry was only now that i came back online.. too much things happened this past week... wish i had more time.. 8(

    20:51  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    May i repost your poem on my site ? And could u comment on the one i have just posted.

    Thank you
    Regards
    G
    http://g-thisisme.blogspirit.com



    P.S. You may mail me at girishgk@gmail.com in case you find posting a comment cumbersome

    22:40  
    Blogger X said...

    my, it's gettin crowded round here already.....hah. glad yer all liked it, kudos to the people who contributed. gd to see yer again fun learning, maybe yer can add someth if have this again? and yesh, thank yer for dropping by LS, seems like yer do this at yer poetry site as well. pls do post it at yer site G and Cookiss99, will drop by yer site after this G. AVS just sent me his/her take on the final stanza, and i'll add that in...Gd day ppl and happy thanks giving

    23:14  
    Blogger The Wandering Deity said...

    The Deity and Chaos are honored for this dedication. Splendid work if I may say. Mortals never really ceased to amuse me from day one.

    23:15  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    this is sooooo cool of you X. thank you so much. we are so touched by this immense gesture:)

    until next time!

    23:16  
    Blogger X said...

    no probs...do let me know how everything went ^^

    02:28  
    Anonymous Anonymous said...

    ha! since everyone is asking permission to post the final piece on their site, i did it too! without asking your permission, eh. sowee... me so proud of you!

    mwah!!!

    00:16  
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