Joint Poem
allo allo, i'll start off with a paragraph. however yer wanna continue, just leave it in the comments. but do remember to read the comments before yers, and continue from there, it'll make it easier for me to include everyone who has contributed. not sure this is the best way to do it, do tell me if yer have suggestions for improvement. write away.....
~ sorrow x ~
Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight
posted by X at 12:13
30 Comments:
Ephipany of sorrows calling
Sorrows hunting twitching
It is of chaos the pain'll strive
It is of order the pain'll die
X,
Could you please send me the daily progress of the poem? My human lover and I have our own duo blogsite. Send me a private email, I will let you know.
Until then,
Akasha
if we summon charon
for stygian trips
how he suffers us
the malignant deserts
Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight
Ephipany of sorrows calling
Sorrows hunting twitching
It is of chaos the pain'll strive
It is of order the pain'll die
If we summon charon
for stygian trips
how he suffers us
the malignant deserts
Desert the crumbling hearts
to dust the earth
with death-
songs heaved
within each breath
Until the soul
in endless flight
finds its solace
in the darkening night
Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight
Ephipany of sorrows calling
Sorrows hunting twitching
It is of chaos the pain'll strive
It is of order the pain'll die
If we summon charon
for stygian trips
how he suffers us
the malignant deserts
Desert the crumbling hearts
to dust the earth
with death-
songs heaved
within each breath
Until the soul
in endless flight
finds its solace
in the darkening night
Too wise yer are
too wise yer be
I see yer are
two wise for me
what's with the now-you-see-it-now-you-don't title?
human, make up your mind!
what's with the now-you-see-it-now-you-don't title?
human, make up your mind!
damn.....the theme sorta got lost dinch it? oh well.....the title was supposed to be - DEAD MAN WALKING, just to let ppl readin this know. maybe one of yer kind souls can try to salvage it
yeah, felt the same way too when that part was posted, that the poem ended...a lil too short issnt it?
the last stanza...
human do something!
hey leading lady, well it WAS on a roll...now its just cold....hah think i was too long winded on the first comment i sent yer. anyways, if yer'll excuse me, i have a poem to intervene...can feel akasha breathing down my neck...ready to chew....hahhaha
gonna over write the last stanza for the time being...lauren, i'll try to include it if possible, see how it goes, hope yer dun mind ^^ dun wanna end it now coz i'm waiting from two others to write, chaos from akasha's side and atomic velvet sigh
DEAD MAN WALKING
Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight
Ephipany of sorrows calling
Sorrows hunting twitching
It is of chaos the pain'll strive
It is of order the pain'll die
If we summon charon
for stygian trips
how he suffers us
the malignant deserts
Desert the crumbling hearts
to dust the earth
with death-
songs heaved
within each breath
Until the soul
in endless flight
finds its solace
in the darkening night
For chorus of death
Shall ring no bound
To prey on weak
Blood thirst of hound
yes!!! excellent!
not to worry human, i shall not fly out to where you are and suck the living daylight out of you... for now...
so travel on
endless quest
cold heart
caged in that chest
there. Chaos has spoken.
can we get the show going now?
oh well.....who's gonna continue?
DEAD MAN WALKING
Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight
Ephipany of sorrows calling
Sorrows hunting twitching
It is of chaos the pain'll strive
It is of order the pain'll die
If we summon charon
for stygian trips
how he suffers us
the malignant deserts
Desert the crumbling hearts
to dust the earth
with death-
songs heaved
within each breath
Until the soul
in endless flight
finds its solace
in the darkening night
For chorus of death
Shall ring no bound
To prey on weak
Blood thirst of hound
so travel on
endless quest
cold heart
caged in that chest
my apologies. i have been feeding on rats these days. my brain has slowly disintegrated.
what say you mortal?
and i just installed vampire blocker 2000, wad say yer too?
oh...so thats wad yer meant, yer're morbidly forgiven then....ahah...anyways, can someone end this poem now???
DEAD MAN WALKING
Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight
Ephipany of sorrows calling
Sorrows hunting twitching
It is of chaos the pain'll strive
It is of order the pain'll die
If we summon charon
for stygian trips
how he suffers us
the malignant deserts
Desert the crumbling hearts
to dust the earth
with death-
songs heaved
within each breath
Until the soul
in endless flight
finds its solace
in the darkening night
For chorus of death
Shall ring no bound
To prey on weak
Blood thirst of hound
so travel on
endless quest
cold heart
caged in that chest
Tread across a bridge of sand,
Fleeting thought turn and give chase
To spidersilk memories of days gone by
As the sand slips slowly away.
wow, what a 'debate' here. Hey x, you seem to have changed yr display pic and location..hehe.. am i right? Anyway, I am back here today as I have add yr blog to my favourite since the first time I visited you. And today I just want to tell you I have add yr link to my blog at http://anthingblissful.blogspot.com/ . My blog is about happiness and yrs is the opposite of mine.. yrs is so sorrowful, its kinda special and so i decided to add it to mine.. check it out!
the poem is yet to end. let it be a saga.
find another human befitting to write the closing stanza.
your vampire blocker is not working on me, human... it never will..
muahahhahahah!!!
i posted this in our duo blog. hopefully someone saner will add something?
i will let you know.
see ya:)
check it out the latest addition in my site:)
damn! i knew that guy who sold me VB 2000 was a cheat! wait a minute...he kinda looked like bush, and had all those "ban freedom of speech on internet" sticker s.....anyways, switch yer id will yer? wanna talk to deity for a minute.
yep, deity, I checked. it does seem a little "light", but will do. wanna end this soon anyways, i've got two week's worth of poems in me draft box and piling.....
hey ya peace! long time no see, nope, no location change. think i'll stick to this pic for a long long time, so sorrowful.....yep, i'll link yer up as well. nice to have someone local drop by ^^
DEAD MAN WALKING
Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight
Ephipany of sorrows calling
Sorrows hunting twitching
It is of chaos the pain'll strive
It is of order the pain'll die
If we summon charon
for stygian trips
how he suffers us
the malignant deserts
Desert the crumbling hearts
to dust the earth
with death-
songs heaved
within each breath
Until the soul
in endless flight
finds its solace
in the darkening night
For chorus of death
Shall ring no bound
To prey on weak
Blood thirst of hound
so travel on
endless quest
cold heart
caged in that chest
Tread across a bridge of sand,
Fleeting thought turn and give chase
To spidersilk memories of days gone by
As the sand slips slowly away.
Fear not, carry on
The journey is not all that long
The distance, an illusion
A miasma that will pass
Not another step you'll have to take
For the answers are inside of thee
Let go of all that bind
And slide away unto yourself
X this is how i wld conclude it...
For everything ends in me
Melacholy of death shadows me
Soon, Vanity becomes all reasons, for now I hear
Execution awaits in mental prison
Just another dead man walking
ohh.. am i too late? guess i am.. tssk.. my sincere apologies. got too much to do.. but nonetheless.. i cast away my words.. its up to you if you'd like to include it or not.
DEAD MAN WALKING
Weeping souls
In dead of night
Sing their songs
Of death and blight
...
For everything ends in me
Melacholy of death shadows me
Soon, Vanity becomes all reasons, for now I hear
Execution awaits in mental prison
Just another dead man walking
Just another lost soul throbbing
as the blood-thirst heart come forth
alas death! unending unrest!
as i am bound to each step's dictate..
I commence myself to thee.
oh it isn't much bother at all, do come back to see yer part included ^^
thanks alot meso =)
would love to chat, but dun see anyway i can contact yer
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