Joint Poem
Sorrow X welcomes all to another round of joint poetry...here we go again
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
posted by X at 01:13
Sunday, January 01, 2006
Sorrow X welcomes all to another round of joint poetry...here we go again
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
About Me
- Name: X
Be enticed by her softness voice, darkened dreams it brings. Never awake to the hurtful world, listen when the voidness sings.
45 Comments:
Then all at once I spy a fish
Would look so tasty on my dish
Is it so against your style
Or will you, one day, crack a smile?
uh.....hell haveth no fury like a lula scorned
hoho.....rest of the ppl pls continue from here :)
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury
Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor
Human,
the thought is kinda mixed up. Fit this stanza where u deem it right.
Until then.
Very dark blog you have here. I'm loving the images.
Sorry, not good at joint poetry stuff.
hey tl, yer mean all the Ds? nah...i didn't do that intentionally, not sure about lula though.....lol
urgh.....i'm down with flu.....xp
oh...akasha, i pray yer'll bestow upon me some of yer immortality. i realised that even the darkest most sorrow people, are still vunerable to the common flu.....
thanks for the wonderful comment MIA, will check out yer blog too
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury
Darkest sun
Encompass all
Fiery cold
Moon must fall
Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Pretty flowers
Little bunnies
Yellow daisies
Warm and fuzzies
I thought a little balance was in order for this one.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *claws out own eyes and deposits them in the gummy ball machine
Human,
Consider this, if one is so immortal, then why is she not spared with intestinal virus?
Ha! My mortal counterpart is not being careful I guess! Shesh! I curse her!
I will think about making you a my disciple...Give me time.
Until then.
so what is gonna happen next??? me excited again...
Happy New Year!!!
dunno...i'm in lazy mood again, just slept thru my new year's eve....ZZZZZzzzzzzz
nope it doesn't, but it goes well with me, i enjoy life
=)
a freakin wonderful new year to all who come here
happy new year X .. im burning out with academics... hopefully i could do something with the poem too... missed it al dang... happy new year .. did i say .. ok i did.. never mind...
peace
g
oh well, never too late =)
do drop a few lines when yer have the time, gonna put it on hold for the time being and post other stuff
have a wonderful year ahead as well g
Mate this is one hell of a creepy blog. *shivers*
oh really? hah...still feel theres lotsa room for improvement =)
adoi.....who will continue from here?
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury
Darkest sun
Encompass all
Fiery cold
Moon must fall
Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor
young man, please gimme some time and i shall contribute as well. must also harass Chaos to render his talent.
see ya!
mwahhh!!!
yesh pls deity, do end it for me, feeling lazy to prospect for ppl to contribute =)
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury
Darkest sun
Encompass all
Fiery cold
Moon must fall
Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor
cradle not its fallen crest
under mornlight none shall rest
revealed to all, these acts of violence
sows unrest, the deadly silence
thanks for the add phil strangler, will check out yer site real soon =)
oh well, akasha did mention her stanza was kinda mixed up, though i think it's okie....gd to hear from yer again
i'll place the stanzas this way for the time being, suggestions are welcome
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury
Darkest sun
Encompass all
Fiery cold
Moon must fall
Dimly lit sky
Buring brightly
Damning facade
Sinning slightly
Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor
cradle not its fallen crest
under mornlight none shall rest
revealed to all, these acts of violence
sows unrest, the deadly silence
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury
Darkest sun
Encompass all
Fiery cold
Moon must fall
Dimly lit sky
Buring brightly
Damning facade
Sinning slightly
Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor
cradle not its fallen crest
under mornlight none shall rest
revealed to all, these acts of violence
sows unrest, the deadly silence
Mean Helios awaits
Turning of tide he baits
Up ashore the sea light
Moon weeps, Sun is blithe
you are so right! he did erased my comment! lol!
god bless...he must really hate yer...ahahaha
IF you think your poetry is bad check mine out...
BTW Rumours of my death are greatly exaggerated.
Please pop by and I will write you a poem in time.
Kind Regards
The Cloned Corpse of Marcus Tal
oh, yer refering to my profile at blogexplosion?
yep, will check yer out after my trip to KL.
yer contributions are greatly welcomed
X!!! Chaos and I not included anymore in your dark circle? that is mean!!! you also erased my link here. boohoo...you hate me too???
havent been blogging for some time... and im coming up with my contri for this joint poem later. first let me pass on a virus to you... (see my latest post for details)
my AVS, wad honor to bestow upon me the tag virus. yer prob think i can come out with someth weird, or becoz i dun write much about myself.....ahahaha
will get to it in a minute, still feeling kinda tired after my trip.
deity.....i took down yer link coz we dinch wanna hurt someone's feelings remember??? LOL
(anyways it's back up, i guess i can't stay nice.....)
so whos continuing the poem?
hope what i came up fits the ending...
(remembering what ~sorrow~ wrote too)
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury
Darkest sun
Encompass all
Fiery cold
Moon must fall
Dimly lit sky
Buring brightly
Damning facade
Sinning slightly
Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor
cradle not its fallen crest
under mornlight none shall rest
revealed to all, these acts of violence
sows unrest, the deadly silence
Mean Helios awaits
Turning of tide he baits
Up ashore the sea light
Moon weeps, Sun is blithe
take me to thy waves
sweep away this pain
as the sun gradually kills
the dark moon again.
thanks alot for yer long awaited contri AVS =)
think it's coming to an end soon, should be expecting a few lines from the dehydrated corpse of marcus tal and maybe chaos raven
Funky Banana We worship You,
Funky Banana they Eat You,
Banana on a Stick without a clue,
Poisoned, Dark, Deathly, Funky Banana will KILL You
My contribution to your fine endeavour
kind regards
The Cloned Corpse of Marcus Tal
What the FUNK is that?
Shesh, vampires are not supposed to curse. My apologies.
i kinda like it...hah
did the poem end with the banana?
SUN KILL MOON
Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height
Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury
Darkest sun
Encompass all
Fiery cold
Moon must fall
Dimly lit sky
Buring brightly
Damning facade
Sinning slightly
Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor
cradle not its fallen crest
under mornlight none shall rest
revealed to all, these acts of violence
sows unrest, the deadly silence
Mean Helios awaits
Turning of tide he baits
Up ashore the sea light
Moon weeps, Sun is blithe
take me to thy waves
sweep away this pain
as the sun gradually kills
the dark moon again
Funky Banana We worship You,
Funky Banana they Eat You,
Banana on a Stick without a clue,
Poisoned, Dark, Deathly, Funky Banana will KILL You
I am awakening mortals to contribute. I shall give them a deadline. If by then, this poem has yet to cease, I shall drain the last bit of their bloods.
Until then.
hmm.. x? where are you?
uh....akasha...leave some for me
always here AVS, working on poems for the 12 zodiacs
really tough.....brain short circuits after a few lines
oyyyyyyy...velvet missed X... i FEEL THE LUVVVVVV!!!
ahahahhahahahhahah!!!
i guess this is what happens to someone who had drank more than two cups of macchiato... ugghhh...it's already 5 am and me still awake!!!
is that coffee? sounds like the nutty type
me no like kohiiii.....me like teeeeeeea, japo green tteeeeeeeeaa....
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